Without you

Without you

A Poem by Cherry Lai^_^♥~~
"

Can I survive without you?

"

Without you,

Will I be able

To survive?

No,I can't.

 

Family and friends

Are the best.

They give us love.

They give us care.

 

Did you love them

Very much?

Did you spend your

Time with them.

 

Without you,

I will not be able

To survive.

We should treasure

This relationship.  

© 2011 Cherry Lai^_^♥~~


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Very true poem. Our family and friends are really important to us in our lives. I'm relate to it. If you can write more in this poem, it'll be more perfect.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Cherry Lai^_^♥~~
Cherry Lai^_^♥~~

Hong Kong, China



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