Feelings

Everybody has feelings...

Feelings,

Is it what we feel?

Or is it what

We thought.

 

Your eyes

express your

Feeling.

Your can't lie

With them.

 

We shouldn't

Lie to anybody.

Including ourself

And others.

 

Do we really need

To lie?

Or should we tell

Tell truth. 

Reviews

[Fontane Wong]

Feelings is what people have. There's no medicine or things to let you have feelings. Actually, feelings is feelings, no one can ever explain why we have feelings. A true writing and I can relate to it. Quite excellent piece.

P.S In my view, you can use some more beautiful words, the words a bit too simple, but still, it's a great poem.