Give up

Give up

A Poem by Cherry Lai^_^♥~~
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Will you give up?

"

Give up,

Is it meaningful?

You give up hope

When you give up.

 

Never give up,

Fall down

And get up.

Don't give up your hope.

 

Give up is like 

A child walking.

If he give up

How can he get up?

 

Never give up hope,

Fall down

And get up.

No giving up.

© 2011 Cherry Lai^_^♥~~


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An inspire poem. You make different examples of giving up and what'll be the consequence if we really give up. We shouldn't give up, say 'no' to give up, stand up straight, face forward, and that's where your hope is.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Good job in making your point accross. Hope truely is important for life. Without hope, what is there to live for?

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Cherry Lai^_^♥~~
Cherry Lai^_^♥~~

Hong Kong, China



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