Love

Love is sweet,

Which makes you smile.

Love is candy,

Which make you sweet.

 

Mom gives you love,

Dad gives you love,

Friends give you love,

Even when they are busy.

 

Love has large powers,

Which make you happy.

We share love to

Who feel lonely.

 

We can let others,

Feel the power of love.

To make them happy,

To make them sweet.

 

Reviews

[Fontane Wong]

That's the first time I've ever read your poem about love, you did an excellent job on it! Friends, families, teachers... they're the cool breeze in the hot summer, blissful sun in the chilly winter, food and water that you need while you can't survive without it.... They're more than you think. The words are yet simple, but the meaning behind is much farther than you think, it's higher than the sky, farther than the sea, faster than time. That's no explanation or formula to explain all these, there is a simple magic behind, and that's called love. Love is love, and that's no way to tell or explain. A beautiful piece.

[Cherry Lai^_^♥~~]

Love is important...