Deep Secret

It is poem that maybe you would like to read.

Deep secret is unseen,

It contains mystery.

Secret is something

That hides in our heart.

 

Secret is good,

Secret is bad,

Don't hide in our heart

If it is too bad.

 

Secret is a mystery,

Waiting for us to explore.

Except the secret

That are not yours.

 

Sometimes you don't need to hide,

if the secret is too bad .

Just tell them,

With your friends and families.

 

No one will laugh

It's an easy thing,

Just tell them and

It will be much better.

Reviews

[John Faulkner]

Secrets are a mystery if the soul, only to be shared with those chosen to be revealed to.They are ours alone to be cherished..


Nice piece


JOHN

[Daytonight]

I like the way you explore secrets. Well done! Keep on penning.

[stars are far]

it is very nice expressed
but i want to tell you
that even others secrets should not be told because secrets are meant to be a mystery ....
but it is nice ..

[lovepoet]

Are secrets sweet or savoury?
how do they dance upon the tongue?
they bring joy or terror,
when they become known.

A lovely write, Cherry.

[Fontane Wong]

An inspire poem! Simple, short words makes a delicate poem. Adore is so much. Agree with your point, secret is something that hiddens in your heart. You can't know others while others can't know yours too. Actually, keeping a secret is really diffcult, that will make your heart crouch together sometimes. And it may need lots of lies for just a secret. Does that worth? I don't really think so. Share a secret is the best way, no one will make fun of it. They will help you to solve it. An excellent poem.

P.S. But still, I often keep secrets too!