So Tragic

I was inspired some how

Its so tragic that the stars would fall

you call out for an angel but no answer.

the rain will turn into blood and tears for millions of  years.

nothing to do but sit and wait until that undying day

Let the dead rise and kill us now, before the day we come into the light of desire.

the light might burn us all, into ashes we will fall.

our  eyes cannot see, our hearing will be slient

our mouth will be dried and dead, so death gave us this kiss

a mist of shadows cover us all. before we fall into damnation. we call home..

so come with me and both of us shall leave this place for all eternity

Author's Note

I like this one, very interesting

Reviews

[DamienHino]

oh dang epic poem...really can't say much other than that it's very impressive.

[quill of shadows]

this is pretty good i like it

[The Cute 1]

this is good