Untitled.

Untitled.

A Poem by krysdiamond
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simple

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The world covered in darkness
there's no way out of this game
Only your shadows will commit crimes
your souls will fly away into nothingness
your body will be scattered onto the cement floors
blood all over.
Murder is what you make of it
actions, thinking, waiting.
Fin.



© 2010 krysdiamond


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krysdiamond
I think i should add more, any suggestions?

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fin means end lol well i should've made it more clear in the begining

Posted 14 Years Ago


hmmm sounds like people who do bad things unconsiencly or something...maybe it could have a more descriptive intro...what does "Fin." mean at the end?

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on September 18, 2010
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krysdiamond
krysdiamond

Delano, CA



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