time travel

 

time travel?

the infamous gap between two uncommon worlds

ultimatly grasping as one

together forming the distance of nothing to something

feel the world spinning beneath your feet 

veiw the  unknown and snatch it

go on! i said

just take it

its yours

as well

as mines!

will you share our universe 

 

 

 

Author's Note

i dont think it really has anything to do with time travel ... but more of working as one on this world we share

Reviews

[RAWR!]

i think its really funny this is called time travel and then your authors note says its not.
xD
i think you mean dimensions, but please dont change the name of the poem, its more charming when it says timetravel.

[A Simple man]

Interesting poem, definitely a good read. Only suggestion would be to fix "mines" to mine. Other than that good flow and good idea. The topic isn't exactly easy to write about, I think the way you wrote it fits though. Short and direct gets the job done!

Thanks for the read!

-Simple Man