lies.

lies.

A Poem by cherrydawling

 

 the summer before haunts her everyday.

When she was so in love,

and how her pushed her far away.

 

She thought he was the one,

even when everything was so new,

until the day came,

when she learned he wasn't true.

 

She spits out his promises,

to her they're all lies.

She's closed herself long ago,

 

she still loves him, why?

 

© 2011 cherrydawling


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Love hurts! I like this the feelings are powerful.

Posted 13 Years Ago


No one can explain love, even though how much he pushes you away, you just can't help falling in love. Its sad, when the one you love don't love you... Just one thing , the line 'how her pushed her far away.', do you mean 'how he pushed her far away.' ?
Anyways, its a great poem!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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|Kelly.|16yrs.|aspiring writer|lover&fighter.| So basically I decided to join this because Im tired of my comp books going missing, and since my last phone got stolen, all my poetry and writings .. more..

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A Poem by cherrydawling