Wait.

This poem was inspired by those suffering with depression and suicidal thoughts. It is also for prevention and hope.

 

Wait.

Wait for the world to get better,

wait for the sun to shine,

it might take long, but it wont be forever.

wait for the pain to pass,

there will be other days,

patience will make the time go by,

just please dont throw your life away.

 

Author's Note

this is my first poem, first post, im a newbie. :)

Reviews

[Calypso]

Beautiful. Well done for your first post. You'll do well on Writerscafe!

[Cynthia]

A great first poem! Waiting, yes, its better to wait then to die, although to me, fighting for ourself is more important >< But I actually love the encouraging tone and mood you bought in this poem! I love it much! The last line is true, never throw away the most precious thing in out life, is our life its own, cause its important we live when we can :)
Great Work!