chapters of my life

The first chapter started when I was born

There was happiness filled aloft

Second chapter started as I became a teenager

Life became a bit hard thinking about my career

As exams were coming near

Third chapter started when I became an adult

At that period of time

The time of sorrows started

But I was taught to leave sorrows behind

And be happy because walking with a smile on the face leads to success

Fourth chapter started with stress on toiling days

Toiling was the most important thing of my life

Fifth chapter started with pain in my bones

Which told me that my age won’t work

But in the sixth chapter something went wrong

It was left incomplete as I departed the world 

Reviews

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I love this piece because life is like a book. Like every book, it comes to an end. Beautiful write. N.

[Urja Gokani]

thanks a lot :)

[Aphy!]

Very nice. Life's journey really portrayed and described beautifully. Nicely done hey

[Urja Gokani]

thanks a lot

[Aphy!]

It's a pleasure

[wordman]

it`s life's path, birth to death,then re birth
thought provoking write .

[Urja Gokani]

thanks a lot

[wordman]

my pleasure

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Live goes over us. sometimes hard and sometimes not. Well write with words of beauty and pain.

[Urja Gokani]

thanks a lot

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You welcome lot

[the green apple]

Very tragic. The sad part is that getting old is an inescapable reality.
This really shows some emotion and feeling behind that journey we
all have to take. Well done!

[Urja Gokani]

thanks a lot

[Bear]

The book of life, chapter by chapter from beginning to end, again it is very creative and shows off your writing talents. It has been a pleasure reading your poetry this evening, thank you for entertaining me :~)

[Urja Gokani]

thanks a lot

[Mike Lu]

you are gifted. Very creative, infact. Great poem i've read in years

[Urja Gokani]

oh my god thanks a lot

[Mike Lu]

No Doubt