lazy people

lazy people

A Poem by Urja Gokani

lazy people are kinda crazy people
i agree i am one of them
they sit on a sofa all day long
they don't even open the door when it goes ding-dong

they act like a funny-bunny 
they really waste a lot of money
they don't even go for a walk
they only know how to talk 

they don't even know how to switch on the light
they don't even know when it turns night

and when they have to work 
they are like owls
awake at night
asleep when there are clouds

© 2015 Urja Gokani


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lord i may know some of these people,yeah it`s me lol

Posted 9 Years Ago


Urja Gokani

9 Years Ago

thanks a lot
Tighten it up a bit, your prose wavers from the beat set forth, and you might make Ogden Nash proud


Posted 9 Years Ago


Urja Gokani

9 Years Ago

thanks a lot
I have to say, I agree. I am really lazy but if it's work, I would be awake all night, but if it's not, I can't wake up at all. And I have to say, I too am crazy at times.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Urja Gokani

9 Years Ago

haha thanks

I like being lazy on rainy days somrtimes..but for the most part I'm on the go..I like your poem

Posted 9 Years Ago


Urja Gokani

9 Years Ago

thanks :)
I can say I agree with you on that. Even though the poem is very short, it explains a lot about lazy people. At one time were all lazy people. A great write. Keep writing!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Urja Gokani

9 Years Ago

haha thanks :)
Heartful5160

9 Years Ago

Your welcome!

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Added on January 10, 2015
Last Updated on November 5, 2015
Tags: lazy, people, funny, door, sofa, long

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Urja Gokani
Urja Gokani

maharashtra, mumbai, India



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