FEAR

I CAN SEE THE DARKNESS IN YOUR EYES,

TRYING TO GET OUT OF IT BUT YOU CAN'T

I CAN SEE THE PRESSURE SHE IS GIVING YOU,

I CAN SEE EACH AND EVERY TEAR 

WHICH IS ROLLING DOWN YOUR CHEEK,

I AM TRYING TO CLEAN THEM,

BUT YOU DON'T LET ME 

YOU DID A BIG MISTAKE,

FALLING FOR HER,

BUT YOU DID NOT KNOW 

THAT SHE WILL BLOW YOU AWAY

I TOLD YOU SEVERAL OF TIMES

BUT YOU NEVER LISTENED

IF YOU WOULD HAVE

YOU WOULD NEVER BEEN A FEAR.

Reviews

[Bhumika Devkota]

Great job! There's a grammar mistake, "That she will blow you away", The Blow should be past tense. Other than that, great poem!

[Urja Gokani]

thanks!! :)

[bee]

Nice poem..... there is a slight spelling mistake, its "that she will Blow you away"...blew is past tense :)

[Urja Gokani]

oh yeah sorry i think i should change it :) and thanks for the review.

[bee]

My pleasure..