THE PAST IS IN THE PAST

The day i was left alone,

it like tears in my eyes,

it was like no one cared,

it was like u warn't there,

but i don't need to care,

cause the past is in the past any way

the night i was left alone,

it was like a headache,

it was like i have never been alive,

it was like i am raising the dead,

but i don't need to care,

cause the past is in the past anyway

Reviews

[kanyinsola okafor]

i am able to relate with your emotions, but you made quite few grammatical errors in the course of u creating your rhymes. work on that, and if u must make them quote them so that we know that u did it on purpose.

[Urja Gokani]

thanks a lot i will try

[Bhumika Devkota]

Nice poem, a lot of people can relate with this.

[Urja Gokani]

thanks a lot!! :)

[David Ung]

Not bad at all, I just thought it would be longer. Overall it is great. Keep up the good work!
The past is in the past!

[Urja Gokani]

haha thanks :)

[Lost stranger]

nice wording i can really relate to this poem in a lot of ways

[Urja Gokani]

thanks a lot :)

[RayXor]

not bad not bad at all. leaving the past behind can be tough.
thank you for sharing this is a good write.

[Urja Gokani]

thanks a lot :)