My Light

This is a dedication to my cousins. I think if you guys read this you will know who you are...

Every two weeks

That’s my getaway

Shadows are my salvation

The lion is my savior

Skills is the bliss

The planets are like my world

The scent that makes everyone sneeze… is one of my best friends

Thank you guys

I love you all

The shadows light up my smile

Lions give me embrace

To make me really laugh, Skills has the right skills

Planets are just a note away, and will always be there

The scent, it makes me delighted in funny memories

I hope you five know, I cherish you

He talks to me, helps me

He sits with me, shares with me

He teaches me, laughs with me

She obsesses with me, is like me

He makes me laugh, hangs out with me

They’re my light

My knight in shining armor

But that only lasts for two days…

And the cycle continues

Two weeks from then…

It all starts over

Author's Note

This. Is how I feel with some of my cousins.

Reviews

[Song in the Farmland]

Actually, it is suppose to be confusing, and yes lol it's more of an inside joke. You don't understand it unless you know them.

[Rachel U.]

This poem seems a little "spazzy" - it's all over the place, really. It was difficult for me to read. The description of five different people (supposedly - that's how the poem presents it) makes it very helter-skelter. Combined with the grammatical issue of mix-matching your plural nouns with singular verbs (and the reverse), it becomes all the more strange to read.

However, I do like your subject matter. It seems like a lot of "inside jokes" are littered throughout, which makes it interesting to try to decipher.

[Sage of the River]

Love it! That's how I feel about my family sometimes. This is my first review so ya..

[TopHatGirl]

MUCH MUCH MUCH MUCH MUCH MUCH MUCH MUCH BETTER. finally song, i was getting worried about your skills. Well done.