Sky Sorrows

A fun poem about rolls in the night. Rolls of humanity------

Sky Sorrows

The sky is lit with twinkling stars

Their shiny pale eyes.....

Are emphasized with shimmering eye shadows

Shadowed with shimmering shades of crimson

They flit across the black screen

 

The moon is shining

Ever so brightly this dark gloomy night

Lacerated, with dents, bruises, indentations,

Upon its smooth creamy top

Speckles of black smother its splendour

Dirt.

Author's Note

Does anybody get my message? Take a guess----

Reviews

[Cynthia]

Wow, I love how you make readers guess the message behind the poem! Its really amazing, I love the way you have told the whole story. So... let me guess... I was bit of affected by the reviews below, and yes, it looks like vampire and werewolves, besides, when will you reveal your answer? I want to know!

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

I love how you described it. It is why I prefer night over day (except for sunsets - love them!) And I am guessing what everyone else said lol.

[Abbie]

um u really ike the night sky ? grreat write:)


100/100

[Sweet & Tender Hooligan]

A mysterious, clever and interesting poem. The title is what attracted me to this. Your wording is beautiful, cryptic and thought provoking.

[Rachelle]

yeah, I don't really get it, but that's just me.

[Midday_Mystery]

I love the poem, but the symbolism lost me on this one... I will have to analize this further.

[Kate Hunter]

nice job. keep writing!

[Linear]

It flits with crimson eyes in light of moon, as stars gently shimmer, wow it's kind of erotic almost, as she tenderly enfolds you in her sensual grasp, and you become hers for all eternity..............enjoyed the flow and now I must go :O)

[Marie Harrison]

What a mysterious poem. I'm very curious.

[Heather D]

i love a poem that leaves a reader to draw their own conclusions. this was beautiful, visual, and a great read :)

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Wonderful! I think the message is that the stars are people we have missed and they have passed, but they still watch us?