Dancing

My first attempt at romance.

Dancing

 

This delicious dance

None other than romance

Has me captive on the dance floor

 

I’m tucked in your arms

Hidden away from any harm

You stroke me gently under the moonlight

 

I know your mine

As we intertwine

A loving embrace

 

Our dance has come to an end

But in reality, it will never end

For I am yours, as you are mine

Author's Note

Thanks a heap to my good friend Stephen Reed. He really helped me with this!!
Added just in time for valentines day!
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Reviews

[OT]

a very sweet ode - and a great first attempt at romance (really your first attempt? it works so well!) - perfect timing with that pesky cherub knocking on the door for monday!! (just change your to "you're" in second last stanza and perfect!!) - very nice as always!!

[Marilu Elizabeth]

:'D oh gawd i want to cry its so beautiful

[Karli]

wow, your first romance? This is better than the stuff I write, and romance is pretty much ALL i write! Really good job:)

[GrandDystopia]

Aw, this was sweet, almost brings a tear to my eye.
Joking, but seriously, this was great, anothr change of pace from you, you never cease to suprise.:)