Dancing

My first attempt at romance.

Dancing

 

This delicious dance

None other than romance

Has me captive on the dance floor

 

I’m tucked in your arms

Hidden away from any harm

You stroke me gently under the moonlight

 

I know your mine

As we intertwine

A loving embrace

 

Our dance has come to an end

But in reality, it will never end

For I am yours, as you are mine

Author's Note

Thanks a heap to my good friend Stephen Reed. He really helped me with this!!
Added just in time for valentines day!
Please review!

Reviews

[OT]

a very sweet ode - and a great first attempt at romance (really your first attempt? it works so well!) - perfect timing with that pesky cherub knocking on the door for monday!! (just change your to "you're" in second last stanza and perfect!!) - very nice as always!!

[Shardbearer99]

That was great. Life always seems that much better when you have someone there to help you through the good and the bad parts. Keep up the good work

[Poetic Beauty]

This has a nice ending and feeling safe is always a wonderful feeling

[Zane]

This is cute :) You did a great job.

[Steph's_romantic_myster..]

AWW I am touched for the credit, Really though I did nothing. You are an excellent writer and a WONDERFUL POET!!!! Your potential superceeds you and this is a womderful poem !!!!!!!!!!!

[Don]

This is a great Valentine's Day poem. It's endearing, and not too sappy. I like it.

[J Michael Simmonds]

I really like this one. You're quite the romantic. Nice going Chels

[Ashley Myers]

Stephen is amazing!!!

[Doreen]

Very sweet.

[Kat24]

hi,
this is really good. Good job. Kat24