Dancing

My first attempt at romance.

Dancing

 

This delicious dance

None other than romance

Has me captive on the dance floor

 

I’m tucked in your arms

Hidden away from any harm

You stroke me gently under the moonlight

 

I know your mine

As we intertwine

A loving embrace

 

Our dance has come to an end

But in reality, it will never end

For I am yours, as you are mine

Author's Note

Thanks a heap to my good friend Stephen Reed. He really helped me with this!!
Added just in time for valentines day!
Please review!

Reviews

[OT]

a very sweet ode - and a great first attempt at romance (really your first attempt? it works so well!) - perfect timing with that pesky cherub knocking on the door for monday!! (just change your to "you're" in second last stanza and perfect!!) - very nice as always!!

[Abbie]

very cute :)


100/100

[Rachelle]

that's a cutie, for sure. I like romance, it's what I live for.

[Midday_Mystery]

AWW I am touched for the credit, Really though I did nothing. You are an excellent writer and a WONDERFUL POET!!!! Your potential superceeds you and this is a womderful poem !!!!!!!!!!!

[Linear]

Twisting tales as lovers leap, dance entwined it blows your mind, gentle kisses hearbeat misses, red rose petals strewn on satin sheets, make us eager to retreat to secluded shaded secret places......... Ah Romance such bliss

[Marie Harrison]

It 's great!

[Kelly M.]

Love it! :)

[Praiser]

So Simpy but sweet as candy , very super

[trainwreck]

Not a bad first attempt. I liked it.

[Jazique]

Nice at love never broken when over but intwined. Wonderfull done.

[Heather D]

i love this! i dont think i have ever read anothers poem that i can actually say i could have easily written myself! this was so relatable to me and very well written! great job :)