Blinded "Love"

Losing virginity.

Blinded "Love"

Love penetrates her eyes

Poking the pupils

Her eyes roll away

 

Her vision of reality, gone

His devious moves

A game of checkers

 

He gets what he wants

While she barely knows what's going on

A game of checkers gone sour

 

He leaves her

Taking a piece of her with him

That, she never, will retrieve.

Author's Note

For any of those woman/girls that have been tricked into losing their virginity. I wrote this mainly for a friend, but figured I'd share.
Please review.

Reviews

[Mauricio Montoya]

its sad how most men think, because there's more to loving a woman than sex you have to be ready to love everything about her, the good and the bad before you take that step to become one. Thank you for sharing I think you've done a great job in bringing this piece together.

[Linear]

This happens all to often, the girl thinks it's the real thing, she loves him and to him she is just another notch on his bed post, something to brag to his friends about. I wrote about this also

[Steve]

This is sad. I am kinda depressed just reading it. But its so true! Unfortunately.

[TheFemininePad]

An amazing piece of poetry. Your imagery within the poem manages to show us the consequences of choosing to use another person for our own goals. The poem is easy to understand, and flows very naturally. I feel like this is one of your most powerful poems that I have read so far. Great job!

[Jim Parson]

This is a good one, Chelsea, with a strong message delivered in your particular and unique style.

[J Michael Simmonds]

Hmmm...yes. That is a very sad thing indeed. You could look at it like a relationship as well. But it all comes back to selfishness. Nice work Chels

[Coyote Poetry]

In the end. Everyone take something from each other. Could be a lesson of sadness or happiness. A very good poem. I like the use of checkers to make your point. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[littlelilypurplebride]

great write
yes never trust
whom ever says
to get in bed with
em and they won't
leave some just want
your body but i was
lucky my man stayed
i never trusted men
but was something
about him. god bless lily

[GrandDystopia]

Very well written, its very true, i know people this has happened to.
A great write as always, Good work

[Sunflower 20]

its really sad, but very true, and very well written :)

[trainwreck]

Pretty true. I like this writing style for you. The lines are so true its sad, actually.