A lot of people have told me not to give away my poem in the author's note, so I wont. But message me if you want to know what it means! It has two meanings, that I wrote anyways, I'm sure you'll find more.
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Day and night are like day and night in most cities..Now even some parks are not safe in the daylight..Drug deals going down..People shooting..Never know what will happen..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for stopping by my work..Your presence sent me a ray of sunshine..Sunflower
I loved the formatting of this a lot, great rhymes! I think your imagery is very clear and to the point, almost has a Blake-like. I got reminded of the Blake poem, "The Echoing Green," when I read it...both versions of "The Echoing Green." Good job.
This was one of your stranger pieces but incredibly cool, the fact that its open to interpretation is what makes it strong.
Great work as always chels:)
Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
- Carl Sandburg
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