Baby Bird

Story of many baby birds.

Baby Bird

Woven into a nest

Tucked deep into your mother’s breast

 

Wind tosses you

 

Upon the ground

Waiting to be found

 

Your mother flies away

 

You fought

But you now rot

Author's Note

I don't know what to think of this. Please review!

Reviews

[Amanda Dawn Sanderson-G..]

This is sad but the honest truth. I found a baby bird once that had wonder quite far from it's own fallen tree and attempted to care for it until it was capable of caring for itself... but he died through the night and I felt so down about not being able to save him from his fate of death because of a fallen mishap. I enjoyed it because I connected with it... and I like a short poem with deep meanings, it's very good.

[Coyote Poetry]

A sad ending to your poem. Nature can be very cold and beautiful also. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Call Me Blu]

Aw. This made me sad, but it had the strangest essence of beauty.

[Zane]

Hmmmm, this is really really really really sad. D:
But good.

[Chelsea]

I like it.. The ending was not at all what I expected, and its a nice surprise at that, if sad.

[hannajade]

I like how you have the rhyme in it, it has a very nice flow!
Its sad though:(. I hate it when I find baby birds dead, or any animal for that matter:( today on a walk I found a dove frozen into the ice, it was wasn't nice!

[lJ french]

good job on it sad but still good job

[E.H. Monroe]

thats what ya get for trying to do things on yer own...f*****g birds

lots of feeling here

[Arabdha]

sad..but well written

[HopelesslyDevoted]

:( i've seen this happen before. its horrible

[Calypso]

Sad. I thought this would be sweeter, but oh well. Well written.