This poem is dedicated to young girls or anybody who shares this opinion. I know how I feel when I look at all those magazines, worthless. I don’t feel like I’m worth anything when I see their flawless faces. But I know, that it’s all faked. They fake it using programs like Photoshop, etc. So they don’t actually look like that but still, I feel badly about the way I look.
Also I chose a picture of a model from the makeup company covergirl. Just showing how perfect they look!
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not all of em are fake but don't let that you down honey i don't look at them magazines we are not perfect but to our father we are beautiful beauty is truely from the soul the spirit when your heart glows when it paints beautiful words upon the paper the Lord singing through you allow your light to shine let that light of yours let it shine see there is flaws on us all but when you look in the mirror don't let it define you only our maker does that no one eles can and when we shine for the Lord and do his will that is beautiful i have been make fun of abd mocked my whole life but just a beautiful face within any kindness or any heart isn't beauty you have a beautiful heart honey and in my eyes the heart holds more beauty then anything cause we show pure loving kindness the lord puts that upon our hearts don't worry about what others think so many don't see true beauty it's already there sweetie remember that just think we are Beautiful to our father more percious then gold to him. Shalom lily
very good work, and the truth is that beauty is but skin-deep, no? very wise words here, this was real good, i just loved this. how shallow can we get sometimes, forking out tens of thousands of dollars just to get a better face? how ridiculous. awesome work!
Yes. I was wanting to write a poem about this. I did, but this is so powerful. Teenage girls, especially, but really anyone who looks down on themselves because someone "loooks flawless" on a magazine cover. i like seeing the pictures of the stars without the airbrush and all that. and really they dont any differnt from a normal mother or daughter or father or son on the streets of NYC.
I love the poem. I agree that the whole magazine thing. However it is also the cosmetic and toy industry that has created this particular monster! When will people realise that those who go by looks alone are as shallow as Gaston and the maids in Disney's Beauty and the Beast!
another good simple poem. i completely agree with you about magazines, its why i dont buy them! it would be nice to see this evolve a little. it is a subject that one get get very passionate about, and i think your onto something with it! although it is a good write on its own!
Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
- Carl Sandburg
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