Volcano

A poem about Volcanoes.

Volcano

Grumble, grumble

Blow your top

Your contents slosh about

 

Author's Note

Just a quick write. I had fun working to get the flow to work. Partially because lava "flows" so I decided this poem should have a bit of irony! Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[Undying Glory]

cool work, and for all the terrors of volcanic eruptions, you sure have made this one really cute, now that's saying something! i really enjoyed this poem!! awesome!
PS: I dunno if you realised it, but you are right in a way about the "slosh" part. after all, the molten rock underneath the Earth's crust does slosh about all the time, the magma that will emerge from volcanic eruptions as lava.
good job!

[T. J. Blackburn]

short, simple. Lots of hidden meaning. well done, dear sir. Ma'am. I tried picturing this with more punctuation but then realized that it'd just ruin it. The lack of punctuation gives it that sense of flowing.

[Jonathan De Elvira]

hurm..I guess you do like to write things that came from nature..good for you...

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Really short and cool!

[Goodbye]

Very cute, very funny!

[HopelesslyDevoted]

awesome, could explain more than one thing. deep :)

[hannajade]

I like this:) a nice poem:)

[underwriter]

nice, its simple, and with a bit of humor!