The Window

The Window

A Poem by Chelsea
"

The window, you and I.

"

The Window

As if you were a window, I the drapes.

Yet pull me off, as if I were some disgusting leech.

All I wanted was security.

© 2010 Chelsea


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Chelsea
Just how I"m feeling. Please review.

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this is really kool maybe you can add more onto it. to maybe make it longer or you can leave it as it is. but i think you should make it longer. that is my opinion though you dont have to listen to me

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Added on December 28, 2010
Last Updated on December 28, 2010
Tags: window, drapes, disgusting, leech, security

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Chelsea
Chelsea

Canada



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