The Window

The window, you and I.

The Window

As if you were a window, I the drapes.

Yet pull me off, as if I were some disgusting leech.

All I wanted was security.

Author's Note

Just how I"m feeling. Please review.

Reviews

[GrandDystopia]

So simple yet manages to pack a huge punch at the same time.
i know the feeling, good work.

[tynamite]

Simple yet effective. I've favourited it.

[Marie Harrison]

Ouch, this one stung.

[Goodbye]

Feeling your pain in this one - excellent and succinct!!

[FallenHeroXx]

F**k i started crying. Simple little poem, a thing that i like. i like the last line alot damn keep on writing :P i like it


A Fallen Hero

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

I hate it when something doesn't work like that or if people don't stick up for you like they should. Good job!

[HopelesslyDevoted]

wow, this is a common feeling that is not easily expressed by will
i like it,
short but powerful

[Poetic Beauty]

With this metaphor your idea and emotions came shining through.

[Jonathan De Elvira]

urm...i kinda agreed with one of the reviews...
you should more and this one would be more emotional and deep...(not that it's not deep)
cool read though...

[Maniacs Doll]

I like the simpleness of this, I don't think it needs to be longer, nice and straight forward, maybe inspired by the haiku structure