The Window

The window, you and I.

The Window

As if you were a window, I the drapes.

Yet pull me off, as if I were some disgusting leech.

All I wanted was security.

Author's Note

Just how I"m feeling. Please review.

Reviews

[YouoweYoupay]

Ahh...insecurity, the feeling of being exposed to a street full of staring people, and your limbs slowly crackling with each glance, all the way to your backobone. I can relate. Brief but great imagery, it hit the spot! Keep going.

-youoweyoupay

[trainwreck]

Rather short and cute. I enjoyed reading this.

[SOUL LESS]

Agree with Lily...God Bless You. *aside whisper* I think she means it sarcastically.:P It's ok...i guess.

[OT]

something many can associate with!! well written and nice imagery!

[Theodore]

I understand that fully half the world feels like this...

[Writer *78*]

Every time I read one of your pieces on here, they get better and better with every word.

[littlelilypurplebride]

beauiful yet so sad,
do hope you're doing well. god bless lily

[Kat24]

hi,
this is really good. Kat24

[Linear]

Great metaphors and well used in this sad poem that you wrote so well

[Jonathan]

Agin to short, I doubt your a person of a few words or are you?