Music

Music seeps into my soul, drowning me.

Music

Music; drifting from the floors below

Pours its liquid self in my ears; without an invitation

The piano twinkling

I imagine the long slender fingers playing

A haunting melody; chilling my spine

Yet it holds me captive

A voice rings out

Belting out low notes

Another voice rings out; softly but much higher

Harmonizing with the low

The sound so beautiful;

I never want the sound to end

Author's Note

Please review. Good or bad?

Reviews

[Nothing Personal]

Intresting. trying to define something which is so hard to. But you did a great job here- especially liked "Pour its liquid self into the ears"--Too good a line, too befitting..Keep it up :-)

[hannajade]

I like it!! I can imagine what you describe very much:)

[HopelesslyDevoted]

i love this, what a beautiful description of combining music and imagination

[*skittlez*]

it is lovely and very cute. keep it up poet girl you wite good poems

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

It's so lovely and pretty! Keep it up!

[tynamite]

I like it that you're accepting bad reviews. Okay then. I like this poem. It's good that you didn't use the word haunting in the typical way.

[Morgan]

I really like it! It is definitely good(:

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Its good, the last few lines don't flow well. But, great poem