Holiday

Cheery lil' Christmas poem!

Holiday

Snow glitters; lit by the glowing sun

Hills carved as sleds dash upon the fresh powder

Streets filled with jolly faces

Each unique but quite devine

Smiles and waves shot here and there

People hidden behind stacks of presents

Some wrapped in polka dot bows

I twirl amidst the cheerful chaos

A flutter from my heart; a grin from ear to ear

It’s here; Christmas has arrived

2nd Place Holiday Hope

Dec 23, 2010

• Holiday Wishes
• Holiday

 

Author's Note

Worked on flow in this poem! Please review.

Reviews

[....]

lovely & sweet write

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Great job! It talks about two of my favorite things: winter and Christmas!

[Goodbye]

This did flow nicely...Well done!

[Kate Hunter]

good write. Nice job.

[Poetic Beauty]

The flow is easy to follow in this poem. The scene in this poem paints a perfect picture of what it is like at Christmas time.

[*skittlez*]

this poem is very good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! did you come up with this on ur own poetgirl

[tynamite]

I'm preferring your happy christmas poem.

[Jonathan De Elvira]

Exactly...not much to say as you've pretty much wrote everything down just like what I've seen during this Christmas eve...

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good flow. Christmas is here. Can see all the bright lights. I like the description and feel of happiness in the poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[deeps]

This is wonderful and sincere.