Friendship

The dance of friendship.

Friendship

Dancers twirl about

My eyes seek the ones.......

With similar strengths and weaknesses

We step in life together,

One step at a time;

Holding one another when weak

Laughing all the way

Friendship

 

Author's Note

Dedicated to all of my friends (also my chums here on writerscafe!). One person in particular.. HANNAJADE! She's my best friend ever, just so you all know :)
Now to the poem....I used dance as a comparison to friendship. Usually you select your friends based on similarities, not usually differences. Then the poem just goes into how you help one another out! Friendship, the best gift of all! I’m so glad for it :)

Reviews

[Marie Harrison]

Lovely poem so true too! We need friendships like we need air. I think this applies to women more than men.

[hannajade]

ahaha chelsea i love this!! and i love you!! my favourite line is defaintly "holding one another when weak", it really hit me.., the idea of comparing dancing to friendship is awesome.
iloveyou, and missyou, and your bff as well(:

[Aven]

a wonderful poem dances across this page... one of my favorites by you I believe :)

[tynamite]

I like the spaces inbetween the lines and the short sentences it's really effective.
"We step in life together, one step at a time." What more can be said?
Your poem speaks alot of truth.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

aw, this is really cute! nice job! :)

[Goodbye]

Now I have to call my best friend of 36 years to tell her I love her! We do tell each other that all the time...

what a sweet poem about wonderful friendship.

[MuSe Ampoule]

Good job...nice light and sweet poem

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a great way to describe friendship.

[Kate Hunter]

this is a really cute piece of writing. I could almost see it in a card. :)

[Morgan]

(: wonderful work of art!