Confusion

A poem about not understanding the world.

Confusion

Nothing written in stone,

Morals made to be broken

Promises to be taken back

Friends to backstab

Hearts to break

The world an unreliable place

I stand in the midst

A young woman, finding my way

Fragile and forgotten in the rush

I’m drowning in confusion.

Won’t somebody come and save me?

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Goodbye]

Very good job on the poem!

The more you look for someone outside of yourself to save you, the more disappointed you will be. Look to you spiritual heart, and what you want out of life, and be true to it - be flexible, but be true. That's my wise old woman word of the day, formed from hard experience.

[Sunny Skye]

Very nice job.
I really like it it was short but said so much. As you grow older I've noticed i
understand better everything, why things are the way they are and why things happen some things are good and somethings are twisted but as you search for answers you'll understnd the world.

[*skittlez*]

this is also a very very good poem i really like it

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem. You ask many good questions. You are still young and have opportunity to do great things. Easy to get confused and pissed off. Better to smile and become stronger with the tests of life. A excellent poem. You are a very good writer. Thank you for sharing.
Coyote

[Zane]

This was a great read. I found it easy to read because i can relate to the confusion in the world.

[Silence Dogood]

good job, you're not bad at this at all...

[MuSe Ampoule]

A sympathetic ear is the best life-preserver ever. Here you have many ears. Good job.

[tynamite]

Your poems are very good at making sense of the world.

[Kate Hunter]

wow. very good write. Awesome word usage. Good Job!

[Aven]

nothing is written in stone, yet people want to give that appearence... you can change your life, but you will most likely need to shizzle your way out...