A Sad State

A Poem by Chelsea

Senyru about a broken heart.

A Sad State

You left me behind

My heart lacerated

Way beyond Repair

© 2010 Chelsea

Author's Note

A senryu, my first attempt! Thanks to my friend on here (Marie Harrison) who taught me how to write these! Please review.

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Aven

I don't know much about senryu, but it's beauty reminds me of that in haiku... it captures an emotion or an experience in very few words and always leaves the reader wanting more... I'm a big fan of short poems and you did great :)

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Added on November 17, 2010
Last Updated on November 18, 2010
Tags: sad, sate, lacerated, beyong repair

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Chelsea

Canada

About

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. - Carl Sandburg Hello! Thank you for checkin’ out my page on the café! My name is Chelsea or Chels. I’m fifteen years old, your .. more..