The Truth Behind Thunderstorms

A poem about thunderstorms and the roll thunder, lightening etc. play.

The Truth Behind Thunderstorms

Thunder claps the rhythm

The lightening flashing across his sheet of music

So he can continue playing

Clouds annoyed by the ruckus blacken the sky, covering the sun

The rain falls freely, not engaging in this horseplay

Author's Note

Hope you enjoyed, please review!

Reviews

[Writer *78*]

I enjoyed this very much, but I also think you could expand on it a little more. When I read it I saw thunder lightning clashing together. With the line "He continued playing" all I see is Zues up in the clouds playing around and the greek gods having fun with him. Every line was like it was invented by the gods. I have to admit this IS the best poem you have written thus far. You really have a nack as they say for writing. Very well done.

-Writer *78*

[Zane]

Great job. This was really cool to read. :)

[Periac]

a very well written piece and I enjoyed the mix of music connotation,,,,clever

[MuSe Ampoule]

Very nice! I always love poems/writings that personify the mundane. After all nothing at all is truly mundane if you think about the wonder of creation and being. Beautiful work, wonderfully simple and sparse of fluffy over-wording!

[Dani]

Interesting view of the storms. I think of the rain as a thunderous applause :P

[Goodbye]

Lovely reflection on natural phenomena. I like this very much!

[Silence Dogood]

great i think it's awesome since it refers to it as music. good work