The Truth Behind Thunderstorms

A poem about thunderstorms and the roll thunder, lightening etc. play.

The Truth Behind Thunderstorms

Thunder claps the rhythm

The lightening flashing across his sheet of music

So he can continue playing

Clouds annoyed by the ruckus blacken the sky, covering the sun

The rain falls freely, not engaging in this horseplay

Author's Note

Hope you enjoyed, please review!

Reviews

[Writer *78*]

I enjoyed this very much, but I also think you could expand on it a little more. When I read it I saw thunder lightning clashing together. With the line "He continued playing" all I see is Zues up in the clouds playing around and the greek gods having fun with him. Every line was like it was invented by the gods. I have to admit this IS the best poem you have written thus far. You really have a nack as they say for writing. Very well done.

-Writer *78*

[Kat24]

hi,
this is really good. Kat24

[Undying Glory]

nice work, i sure like this one a lot. i mus agree, this sounded simple and very nice, i think this was also a very unique take on thunderstorms. great work!

[G. K. Bostic]

I did enjoy this....I like the simplicity.....well written!

[Linear]

Lightening sheet music, a thunder rolls baton, and clouds disarray all come together to play. poetry

[GrandDystopia]

A really nice piece, i love the wonderment of thunderstorms and you seemed to capture that brilliantly.
Nice job, as always

[HopelesslyDevoted]

i did enjoy reading this, what a captivating piece! excellent!

[Jonathan]

Personally this didn't get me off, felt let down honestly.
Felt you could have had more more to it. I'm sure other people
Might like it though.

[Nobody.]

:) Love the metaphor: rain/music. And especially like the last line. good stuff. I enjoyed. Cheers!

[Marie Harrison]

Very cute, I love how the weather elements have helped you compose your own personal symphony in this awesome poem. Very clever!

[hannajade]

awesome chelsea! i love it :) great idea !!