Like All the Barbies

Would you like me more
If I dyed my hair bright blonde
Like all the Barbies

Reviews

[windmill]

i like the untouched, implied things that are present in here.
sad shadows.

(ps: if the answer's yes, leave.)

[brooding poet]

there's the idea that the perfect woman has to be a size two...has to be blonde...and has to be totally uneducated. i personally enjoy women that actually eat...women with black hair...and women that i can have a real conversation with.

call me crazy. great poem.

[Eric]

This poem means very different things if you read it with various inflections. I personally like the sarcastic one. The codependent one is good too.

[Ryan Gilroy]

A very simple haiku. The words seem to flow very remotely from this piece and it provides a great reference to high school.. It's a great spin on the tale of how we view the chaos, the disorder and the moments of why high school can make the strong survive, and have the weak of the pack end up dead and eaten by the strong. I think you should rephrase your title and make it a little more simple, and create one that's a little smaller so that's it not a mouthful of words and other then that your diction of your haiku was pricelessly.

[Nicole Lyn =]]

I def know how that is. If you're like barbie, everyone just seems to love you.

Wonderful Haiku! I seriously love it.

[A.M.P.]

Hahaaha! Love it! Haikus are usually all natureific (I invent my own words) but this was both sad, true and fun! So many people today conform to what they think the "mold" is....There are too many Barbies in this world to count, and I'm not just talking about the plastic kind, if you know what I mean. Great job!

[Life With You is Like a..]

never conform to the barbies!!! they may have looks that some guys want, but they crave what others have which is the respect they've earned. great job, and thanks for submitting your haiku in my contest

[V M Smith]

love it.

[Erin Hogan]

as soon as i saw the title i was smiling... great job!

[Joanna Colby]

i like it. haiku is so fun...