My True Love

 

 

My True Love

 

Look at me... don’t glance,

Do you not see what I see?

Come close to me and feel my breath,

Does it not scream to you passion?

 

Slide your hand across mine,

Can you not feel my pulse?

The strength pounding through my veins

Why am I the only one affected by you?

 

Put your hand upon my chest,

Can you not feel my heart thrash against you?

You cause this....these emotions,

Just subside me once again, you don’t realise do you?

 

My eyes see deep inside your soul

Do your crystal pools of magic, view into mine?

I love you so much, please love me also

My one, my only, my love

Reviews

[William Usry]

Very effective representation of the emotions that come with a love unreciprocated. I enjoyed this very much.

[(:]

Love.
It's odd! Even though I have never experinced it! xD
Anyways, I love this. It isn't all lovey dovey to me. It's firey!

[Stephaniee]

All the people below say posh things.. all i can say is wow.. that is so amazing.

[Arthur Henn]

Another beautiful written piece... Our words perform better when they grow from the crossroads of reality.

If this soul has not noticed the way you feel...He needs to get up close and personal and really look into your eyes... Jeddie, there is so much love here.

Thank you for sharing.

Art

[N. N. Grainger]

look at you. you go girl

i did panic then i thought that was gonna turn into erotica lmao

[J. Alexis Balaguer]

Ah the sadness of unnoticed, unreturned love.
It was a good read.

Punishment

[Casper Cross]

Beautiful writing... you must be in love :

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Oh this is so tender yet so firey passionate at the same time.. nice flow and words.. descending from firey passion to submission and true surrender of and plea for love... great writing! Thank you for sharing! =)