A Yearning

 

A Yearning

 

My heart bleeds for the attention it seeks

Your smile, your touch, your glance

I thrive off the words your converse with me

But do you realise the extent I adore you?

 

We act as just links,

But I want more, I want you

On the outside I smile, I laugh

On the inside I scream, I cry!!

 

How do you not experience the longing I do,

The lust, yearning, the greed

I wander with you in my dreams,

But lumber behind you in my awakening

 

The frustration that haunts me,

Will you ever feel the same?

Perhaps not for me

But yet another not fascinated

 

I will then be at rest,

A peace that you now hope for,

Viewing emotions I remember experiencing

How it felt for your heart to bleed!

             But for now I just survive...

Of the contact you so little provide me with,

I a wish of two becoming one

A connection, a relationship

Reviews

[N. N. Grainger]

jess when i read your stuff yeah, i dont feel i need to comment on non of the stuff because i can just absorb it seamlessly because it flows so well dya get me, that a compliment by the way


challenge for you!... try writing in a different structure, take a mental photograph but not one whats just visual..like smellivision...and birng the words together

[Kelley]

Sounds like you need to tell this person how you feel or they may never know......smiles
Great write Jeddie! Thanks for sharing.

Kelley

[Arthur Henn]

very nice...written for one you deeply feel a lot of love for.

Thank You for sharing.

I know the feeling.

Art

[J. Alexis Balaguer]

The yearning is powerful. Melancholy as well thrived within the poem.
My favorite lines are:
I wander with you in my dreams,
But lumber behind you in my awakening

It was a good read!

Punishment

[Akash]

The flow was serene yet so demanding and even fierce.
Very beautiful.
Thanks for sharing....

"On the outside I smile, I laugh
On the inside I scream, I cry!!"

A deep poem...

Love
-akash-