When One

 

                     When One    

                                  By Chaz Nicoll

 

When one hurt themselves to get rid of the pain

 When one thinks there is no point to life

When one says your not there, only to gain

When one is perfect and you want them to know

When one is beautiful and says that she isn’t

 When one has feelings and you want them to show

When one is the one you are with

That one must read this

When one is the one

That one will let you know

When one is there thick and thin

That one is the one and only

When one no longer needs to cry

That one will wonder why

When one understands that you are there

That one will realize that you care

 

 

 

Reviews

[Rachel Cooper]

Very well written. The subject matter is very powerful.

[Jules]

This poem is really well written. I enjoyed reading it.

[Kitty Forzaken]

lovely written!