Someone like you

If i had someone like you,

my heart would be so true,

the beating would be so fast,

nothing in this world would make it not last,

 

The happiness inside me,

comes out upon my face,

nothing in this world could not make me lace,

this feeling i have for you,

 

It just hit me one day,

and this feeling wont go away,

my hearts beging you to stop by,

hoping you never have to say goodbye,

 

My choice is this,

this feeling i have wont go away,

so I've decided to make it stay,

 

As love my heart admires,

this feeling for you is a true desire,

to bad its just a feeling,

you wont know the real meaning.

Reviews

[Michael.]

I like everything except "The happiness inside me,
comes out upon my face,
nothing in this world could not make me lace,
this feeling i have for you,"
It just seemed out of sync.
Most of it had a good rthym going, though. :)