We are weak

Heartbreak is the worst pain that we can experience.

We are weak

Written by: C. Lee Battaglia

Why is it that we are weak?

Why is it when we want to speak,

We convince ourselves not to?

It’ll make us look like a fool.

I’m just an idiot, aren’t I?

Maybe it would be better just to die.

Maybe I’m here just to cry

You can’t say that I didn’t try.

You told me that I was nothing.

So tell me why should I continue to sing?

Why should I continue to dream?

This is something that I’ll forever deem.

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Author's Note

Please leave me constructive feedback!

Reviews

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Because life goes on no matter what and finding your voice is the bravest most honest thing you can do- you be you no matter what it’s none of your business what others think about you you just be the best you u can be they must take it or leave it- you are the most important one- great words love the questions🌹

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Thank you so much! this means a lot to me!

[&lsquo;Thoughts In Time&rsquo;&#127801;]

Always my pleasure🌹

[C. Lee Battaglia]

:) could you check out my recent poem please? Thank you once again!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

I enjoyed reading this piece, I'd like to add that it seems unfinished in a way, almost like I'd love to see you write and answer piece to the questions posed in this piece, as it is perfect in it's question and pace, but consider another if you will.

[C. Lee Battaglia]

I was actually just thinking about this! Thank you for your excellent review!

[Brittany]

I thi k we have all been here...at least I have. But the nigjt fades and gives way to a new day. To a brighter sun, and new opportunities. Never give up or lose hope...and never lose your sense of worth or purpose. This was very moving, and so very relatable. Thank you for sharing this!

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Thank you for this review it is deeply appreciated! I really appreciate the kind words!

[Brittany]

Of course. Keep up the good work!

[Pumpkin Girl]

This is a good poem but I would try getting the reader to feel what your feeling but I think everything else is prefect

[Shattered Rose]

this is good but you could add more detail. make me feel what you feel. And to be a good poem you don't need to rhyme, just remember that.