Broken

Heartbreak is the worst pain that we can ever go through

Broken 

Tic-tok-tic

Struck on 3

Tic-toc-tic

In middle of 4

tic-toc-tic

Now between 5

tic-toc-tic

As it landed 6

tic---

You broke it

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no more time

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for you and I

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Why'd you lie

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Now it's too late

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You can't fix me

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I broke

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You lost time

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Cheated the future

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And now I'm broken

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Author's Note

Please leave me sincere feedback!

Reviews

[Samiat]

Keep it up
This is a good write-up

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Thank you for entering my comp winners announced next Saturday
Beautiful piece of work

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Thank you! I appreciate the review!

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Just as time ticks the heart beats and bleeds- every ending is a new beginning and chapters end but the story goes on- broken allows us to carry our scars with pride and strength - the cracks are how the light gets it- love it🌹

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Thank you once again for the amazing review!

[Anise]

the visual display of the poem really works to enhance the feel of lost time, with the spacing becoming wider. feels painful. i can relate to feeling cheated in that way, wasted time

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Thank you Anise! I'm sorry what happened with your relationship. It's sad and it's the worst pain we can go through.

[Anjali]

Hmm... Interesting... Quite unique, theme and concept is really good! Keep up with the good work

[C. Lee Battaglia]

I really appreciate your review!

[Anjali]

Mention not!

[Shattered Rose]

I really like what this represented. I feel that as simple as it is, it's rather powerful.

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Thank you Kylie! It means the world to me!

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice use of time my friend. I liked the flow of thoughts leading to the sad ending. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Thank you Coyote!

[Coyote Poetry]

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You are welcome my friend. I enjoyed the poetry.

[Pumpkin Girl]

I really like your poem! Keep up the good work!

Your friend,
PumpkinGirl

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Thank you so much!