Candy

Candy

Written By: C. Lee Battaglia

Sweet and sour,

You're my wildflower.

You’re my candy,

Such a beauty

Sorry but you’re mine.

It’s hard to define,

You’ve helped me out in so many ways.

With you, I feel like I can get through any maze.

So please never leave my side,

You’re my one and only pride.

Every time you’re with me,

It helps me realize who I want to be.

So Sugar,

Stay by me and I'll be your Sir.

I can’t stop thinking about you,

Those eyes so blue.

I can’t ever get enough,

Because you're my favorite type of stuff.

When you go,

I feel so low.

When you're around,

My feet are high above the ground.

So please stay,

Because every time, you make my day.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful use of words and thoughts. I had to read again. When someone is so sweet. We are in great danger. Thank you Lee for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[ElizaB]

Thank you for entering your piece into my competition.

I thought it was very sweet, simple and anyone who received such a poem would be happy, I am sure of it!

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Thank you so much!

[Eden-Rose]

I love it so cute and sweet. Pardon my pun, but I think it's quite a great piece. You may want to extend it though it kinda has an abrupt ending. Still great job! Keep up the great work!

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Thank you!
I really appreciate the review. I will make it longer.
P.S
Great pun!

[C. Lee Battaglia]

I added more to it...

[Eden-Rose]

I'm glad you added more it makes it feel complete. I absolutely love this poem and I think you did an amazing job!