Lines

life's been hard

Lines

 

Here they hide,

In the lines

 

Crying as they ride

No longer any pride

 

No more jokes

No more joy

 

Only sad and lonely folks

All the broken children’s toys

 

Dead and gone

There lies no hope

 

Nothing else could be drawn

Hurry before they cut the life long rope

 

Every doubt is a line

Waiting for the last breathing whine.

Author's Note

The lines represent the struggle in life.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Many places to land my friend.
"Dead and gone
There lies no hope"
Sometime we reach a dead-end and only better days can come. Strong description led to sad ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[shade]

I love the poem
I like how it flows like water
Great write keep it up

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Thank you I apreciate it!