Fire in Her Heart

Only if I could go back to Utah... :(

Fire in Her Heart

Written by: C. Lee Battaglia

I Know that she misses me,

Because I miss her,

But how can it be?

All this time, is it for sure?

I love that smile,

I just love everything about her,

She helps me with every trial,

But how can it be that I am stuck here for sure?

The Fire,

In her heart,

Is me, the only desire,

But it pierces my heart

She wants me back,

But I'm stuck here,

unable to make it back,

Once I'm back, Will she be my dear?

The fire,

In my heart,

Is her, the only desire,

It downs my heart,

That girl I met a year ago,

Is the best thing thats happened to me,

But it's just a flow,

why did thus have to be?

I will make it back,

She will make it back,

To my arms,

To her arms.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime all we have have is hope and want. If we are kind and a friend. Sometime a second chance.
"I will make it back,
She will make it back,
To my arms,
To her arms."
I liked the drive and positive tone of the poetry. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Thanks Coyote! Is there anything you would like me to read?

[Coyote Poetry]

You know me. I never stop writing. I enjoy your work and you are welcome.

[C. Lee Battaglia]

haha Alright!

[lovergirl]

such a lovely piece , i liked it , it's full of love and desire ;) at least that's what i felt out of these words :)

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Thanks I really appreciate it! look at my new poem if you will... I think you'll like it.

[D.T.]

A simple poem that is really, really beautiful and hopeful in a way. Good job!

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Thank you. I really appreciate it...

[Lola_Bee]

Beautiful and simple! Love the easy flow and the emotion in this piece! Well done, another beautiful piece

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Thanks Lola for the great review!

[Workvio]

A charmingly romantic piece of your heart penned to page ...

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Thank you Marvin! How have you been?

[Madhu]

Time has the best answers. Beautifully written! :)

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Thank you so much Madhu!

[Terrence Chang]

Great write Lee I loved each and every stanza you wrote

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Thanks Terrence!

[Confuser]

Thought it was good. It's all about love, and we may have doubts, about changing who we are; who they are; how to put it all together; how to get back to that Fire in Her Heart. Some very good lines; I enjoyed it: Where there's a will, there's a way, especially with desire's burning fire. Thank you so much. Dale
I'll will make it back,
She will make it back,
To my arms,
To her arms.

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Thanks Dale! Thanks for the comment!

[Confuser]

You're welcome!

[Ehra Khan]

I'm here after a long time and as ever. ..your poetry is absolutely and thoroughly divine. The longing is there in every word you use! loved it! :)

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Thanks Ellen!

[matpat]

I like this a lot! Good job!

[Alex Boyd]

Sounds to me to that the two people in this poem were once together but some how they drifted apart. Now they are trying to find themselves back to each... Trying find that spark that they once had and sometimes we all be looking for that spark that we once had... In relationship, life, work, and etc... We all have been lost or have fallen by the waste side trying to find our way back... Lovely poetry...

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Thank you Alex! I am greatful for the comment... it's a very true one as well!