Another Star Tonight

A poem about my friend that passed away...

Another star Tonight

written by: C. Lee Battaglia

You were once here,

You were my dear,

But now your gone,

But my strength has been redrawn,

I still see you

up in the sky

A new star, that's you

I see you fly

But my heart is still dry

without you,

It seems as if the fun has died,

When you were once... alive

But tonight there is another star,

You are that star,

You were my star,

You are my star,

Author's Note

Who is your "Star"?
Who ever they are make sure they get to know how much you love them before it's to late...

Reviews

[Heartful5160]

My star would have to absolutely be my mother. My mom does everything she can to make me happy. She's always there for me when I need her. I may do things that make her upset, but I know in the end she loves me so very much or she wouldn't yell at me or correct me when I'm wrong. But when I think about it I do have two other stars in my life and I think that would have to be my grandparents. They do everything they can to support me in what I would like to do in my future. They always give me the best advice possible and they're always apart in the decisions I make in my life and in my future! I make sure I let every moment worth remembering, because when I know it's too late, I know I won't regret any of the words I let out of my mouth! That was a great write and keep writing!

[Lola_Bee]

lovely, well written. such a delightful read

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Thanks Lola!

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful use of words.
"But tonight there is another star,
You are that star,
You were my star,
You are my star,"
The repetition gave life and soul to the poetry. Thank you my friend for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Mila]

Very sweet poem here! Good job, I enjoyed it!

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Thank you Mila!

[Terrence Chang]

Good write. Keep it up C. Lee Battaglia

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Thank you Terrence! I really appreciate it.