You've left me without words C.Lee!! ah god! This poem is AMAZING! We all think about
How the world would be if evil wasn't at bay ready to strike us?
The last stanza sums it all up and gives it a powerful and elegant ending
I love this poem, another favorite from you!
Thank you for posting this excellent piece of poetry :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thank you!
I really mean it though... do and remember...
I agree.
"Now Let's do more "Doing"
And Less, "Thinking"
I liked the ideal of doing good deeds and they expanding. If all of us do what we could. Could be a better world. Thank you for sharing the hopeful and positive poetry.
Coyote
Hey this is a gorgeous piece of work. With a really valid point of view. If everything was peachy and perfect we would have nothing to grow from. Nothing to keep life going on. ed be in an eternal stand still. Its actually really scary. But the truth is that there cannot be good without bad, love without hate and so on so forth.
Great job my friend.
Stay inspired.
My dad, who is a doctor, always told me that if we did not feel pain, we would not know how to make it better...We live in a fallen world - I believe, so we feel the pain, to remind us of how much better we would be one day.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Very very true, your father is a smart man.
Thanks for the great review!
According to science, if there was no thunder, then that would mean there would be no lightning. Without lightning, there would not be enough energy to make molecules come together to form amino acids in the days where the earth was nothing but a boiling 'soup'. Without amino acids, there are no proteins. Without protein, there is no life. Literally, then, we wouldn't have anything to "grow from." Therefore, I love this analogy of thunder, as it can be seen as accurate in both the literal and metaphorical sense!!!
But anyways, I agree! There is no up without a down, there is no light without the darkness. Without one and its contrast, how could we really, learn, grow, know the good in this world without the evil at every corner? We wouldn't have the ability to see the bad in the world, or think and wonder about it for a while. We wouldn't be able to choose the brightest path. But since there happens to be bad in this world, we still all have the option to be the good, leading into your question, "What if we were the good?"
And what if we were? That would be amazing to see the day when everyone chooses the right path.
Very thought provoking, with such a fitting title! I like it!
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thanks AMV! I really hope that day does come though…
Very true though, How can we learn with.. read moreThanks AMV! I really hope that day does come though…
Very true though, How can we learn without struggle, pain, and just plain learning?
Thanks for the great interpretation of my poem…
You've left me without words C.Lee!! ah god! This poem is AMAZING! We all think about
How the world would be if evil wasn't at bay ready to strike us?
The last stanza sums it all up and gives it a powerful and elegant ending
I love this poem, another favorite from you!
Thank you for posting this excellent piece of poetry :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thank you!
I really mean it though... do and remember...
My name is C. Lee Battaglia and I love to read… I read so much that my Mom grounds me from reading and tells me to go do something else. I am 20 years old.
I hated reading when I was little .. more..