Run Away

How I felt at the time.

Run Away

Written by: C. Lee Battaglia

I'm going to run away,

Don't try to stop me,

I've already planed the day,

I'll pick up my things and flee,

Will you come?

That's all I ask,

I know it may sound dumb,

But it will be worth the task,

Run away,

I want you to come,

But if you stay,

Then I will hum,

I'll be back,

Another day,

I'll have a knack,

Oh when the sky isn't so gray,

I'll be there,

At your door,

You'll be there,

At your door,

For you my dear,

I'll be back,

For you my dear.

I will be back.

Author's Note

What do you think? Leave me a review please.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I understand this poem. I'm old and I want to run away. Good thoughts and questions in the poetry. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Thank you Coyote! Such a great review!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[C. Rose]

This gave me a smile. While like most children I had considered running away, I never considered running away with someone else. Favorite line "Oh when the sky isn't so gray".

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Thanks Rose! I am grateful for your review!

[Cool Girl]

Beautiful! I've felt this way before.. Love is interesting xD

[Lizardo]

I love this poem, sometimes we just want to run away with the girl or guy we love and leave the problems behind....
Beautiful poem C.Lee. enjoyable to read!

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Thanks dude! It's true though... Haha XD

[Lizardo]

I know right? xD haha You're welcome!

[Luminousgirl424]

I love the form of this poem, after each verse you wait for the rhyme and there it is!!

[Valkyrie Warrior]

This is beautiful, the flow is lovely!!!

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Thanks Lorna! :))

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Your welcome!

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Why are you so nice?

[Valkyrie Warrior]

I am really not, but your work is amazing!!!

[C. Lee Battaglia]

I think you are at least! Thanks though!

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Your very welcome!

[Lola_Bee]

lovely writing, its well placed and flows beautifully

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Thank you!! I just let my emotions flow sometimes and it turns out better then I thought it would.read moreThank you!! I just let my emotions flow sometimes and it turns out better then I thought it would.

C. Lee Battaglia

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very nice and powerful. you create impressive piece what i love read again and again. if you go back i wish you best angel above .

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Thank you so much! I really appreciate it.
C. Lee Battaglia