Run Away

Run Away

A Poem by C. Lee Battaglia
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How I felt at the time.

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Run Away
Written by: C. Lee Battaglia


I'm going to run away,
Don't try to stop me,
I've already planed the day,
I'll pick up my things and flee,

Will you come?
That's all I ask,
I know it may sound dumb,
But it will be worth the task,

Run away,
I want you to come,
But if you stay,
Then I will hum,

I'll be back,
Another day,
I'll have a knack,
Oh when the sky isn't so gray,

I'll be there,
At your door,
You'll be there,
At your door,

For you my dear,
I'll be back,
For you my dear.
I will be back.

© 2014 C. Lee Battaglia


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I understand this poem. I'm old and I want to run away. Good thoughts and questions in the poetry. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


C. Lee Battaglia

9 Years Ago

Thank you Coyote! Such a great review!
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome.
This gave me a smile. While like most children I had considered running away, I never considered running away with someone else. Favorite line "Oh when the sky isn't so gray".

Posted 9 Years Ago


C. Lee Battaglia

9 Years Ago

Thanks Rose! I am grateful for your review!
Beautiful! I've felt this way before.. Love is interesting xD

Posted 9 Years Ago


I love this poem, sometimes we just want to run away with the girl or guy we love and leave the problems behind....
Beautiful poem C.Lee. enjoyable to read!

Posted 9 Years Ago


C. Lee Battaglia

9 Years Ago

Thanks dude! It's true though... Haha XD
Lizardo

9 Years Ago

I know right? xD haha You're welcome!
I love the form of this poem, after each verse you wait for the rhyme and there it is!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is beautiful, the flow is lovely!!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Valkyrie Warrior

10 Years Ago

I am really not, but your work is amazing!!!
C. Lee Battaglia

10 Years Ago

I think you are at least! Thanks though!
Valkyrie Warrior

10 Years Ago

Your very welcome!
lovely writing, its well placed and flows beautifully

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

C. Lee Battaglia

10 Years Ago

Thank you!! I just let my emotions flow sometimes and it turns out better then I thought it would.read more
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very nice and powerful. you create impressive piece what i love read again and again. if you go back i wish you best angel above .

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

C. Lee Battaglia

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I really appreciate it.
C. Lee Battaglia

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Added on November 27, 2014
Last Updated on November 27, 2014
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C. Lee Battaglia
C. Lee Battaglia

Alpine, UT



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My name is C. Lee Battaglia and I love to read… I read so much that my Mom grounds me from reading and tells me to go do something else. I am 20 years old. I hated reading when I was little .. more..

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