A magnificently beautiful story ... Some might say that it was sad to read, and did not have a happy ending ... But I say, this story is perfect in that perfect timing of two people meeting, clueless that they would ever meet, who needed someone special in their lives at that precise moment in time. She gave you something no one else ever could have, and you gave her more than you will ever know, even though you do know ... This story is tender and touching to the very core of any heart that has ever had a first crush or first love, especially someone as special as I see that she was to you ... And you to her ... A wonderful memorial to her memory in keeping her memory alive ... Thank you for sharing ... Very well written ...
Posted 10 Years Ago
4 of 4 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thanks! I really appreciate your time you put in to read my story!
She will always be remember.. read moreThanks! I really appreciate your time you put in to read my story!
She will always be remembered by me... I really like it!
Wow! Its so powerful how this story goes from the simple and sweet perspective to an older more mature relationship. You can feel the passing of time and really emphasize with both of the main characters. I love how pure the love feels. Wonderful!
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thank you Sarah! I really appreciate your time and effort to read my story!
I love this. We dont know what others are truly going through, do we? In highschool i couldn't bare seeing anyone left out. Totally broke my heart. I knew how i was so i tried to treat everyone as my bestfriend (self harm suicidal at the time but no one knew. Everyone thought i was fine.) My thoughts were if i can't save myself i'm going to save them. This is a beautiful story and shows the good in others. Great write my friend.
-Courtney
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thank you Courtney! I can totally relate to you and what you went through in high school! I was the .. read moreThank you Courtney! I can totally relate to you and what you went through in high school! I was the same way, I was to depressed with my own thoughts and so I tried to include everyone. I to had a problem with self harm and It was taking over my life. Just until recently I have rid myself from it. Thank you for sharing your thoughts and reviewing my story! It really means the world to me!
This was a beautifully constructed story. Like to kill a mockingbird you have artfully used not only the story of a child trapped/destroyed but really expressed it through their voice, with the simple language, childish terms especially the very start when you used the phrase 'the bully said' I totally believed the 7 year old's voice. The horrific illnesses are always worse when inflicted on those who are completely innocent.
It is a story we all know has been the reality of too many.
Thank you for recommending me to read this I don't see enough stories on here, especially not of this quality.
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thank you Emma for your kind words and for taking some of your time to read my story! I really appre.. read moreThank you Emma for your kind words and for taking some of your time to read my story! I really appreciate it! And you are right. It is a reality of many... Thank you once again for this great review!
I think her purpose in life was to make a difference in your's. She made you believe in yourself, and that is a lesson we all learn in time. As long as you keep writing, she'll always be by your side, giving you the support and love you so unconditionally gave to her. But you have something more than most of us get in life - you have your own angel!
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Kelly, thank you! your words touched me and I am really thankful for your time to read and review th.. read moreKelly, thank you! your words touched me and I am really thankful for your time to read and review this! It means the world to me!
This is a very great story with a lot of meaning. I really love it Thank you for suggesting this story to me.
Your Friend,
PumpkinGirl
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thank you. I really appreciate it! Thank you for taking some of your time to read and write this com.. read moreThank you. I really appreciate it! Thank you for taking some of your time to read and write this comment!
Such a touching and bittersweet write. A story of love pure, unconditional. We never know what a simple smile can do or a hand offered in kindness. Thank you for the kindness portrayed in this wonderful story. It is sure to uplift and encourage anyone that reads it. Thank you so much for sharing it with me. So very well done!
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
I appreciate your review. I'm glad that you learned something from it and I am very grateful for the.. read moreI appreciate your review. I'm glad that you learned something from it and I am very grateful for the time and effort you put into reading it!
Simply beautiful. Such a profound impact made in so few years here on earth. Truly a blessing. This tribute hits me hard...as I have recently lost my best friend. A perfect example of the "power of one"...cherish the memories and live life to the fullest...your Angel is watching.
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thank you so much for your kind words. I am sorry about your friend. May their spirit watch over you.. read moreThank you so much for your kind words. I am sorry about your friend. May their spirit watch over you...
Amazing wonderful beautiful and made me want to cry- your words are deep and meaningful and I’m so sad and sorry for your loss but you will always be together forever- Dolly Partons song Together You And I- so many people that are worse off than us and people don’t take time for eachother too full of judgemental attitudes- I’m so glad you two were blessed to have eachother live eachother and you came together for a reason and a season- some questions will never get answered I guess- just a beautiful heart touching story🌹
My name is C. Lee Battaglia and I love to read… I read so much that my Mom grounds me from reading and tells me to go do something else. I am 20 years old.
I hated reading when I was little .. more..