A magnificently beautiful story ... Some might say that it was sad to read, and did not have a happy ending ... But I say, this story is perfect in that perfect timing of two people meeting, clueless that they would ever meet, who needed someone special in their lives at that precise moment in time. She gave you something no one else ever could have, and you gave her more than you will ever know, even though you do know ... This story is tender and touching to the very core of any heart that has ever had a first crush or first love, especially someone as special as I see that she was to you ... And you to her ... A wonderful memorial to her memory in keeping her memory alive ... Thank you for sharing ... Very well written ...
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Thanks! I really appreciate your time you put in to read my story!
She will always be remember.. read moreThanks! I really appreciate your time you put in to read my story!
She will always be remembered by me... I really like it!
This was a very beautiful story..
I'm sorry for your loss.. It is so hard to lose someone, even if you know it's coming. If you love them, there's no other hurt in the world.
A truly beautiful piece!
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you Nikki! I'm very grateful for your comment!
It was heartfelt and very touching. C. Lee Battaglia, I really enjoyed reading it. It is so, so very sad and I am sorry that happened to her at such a young age and to you. It sounds like you did love her and will never forget her: Sara; she didn't judge you and was very kind. She sounds like a beautiful soul, and you are also very kind and respectful to her and her memory to write about her and say how special she is and how she helped you. I really appreciate it. Great writing - Thank you. Dale
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thanks Dale... She was my half that made me whole...
This was a great story and Im so glad you shared. I dont know what stage of life your in but this was a great reminder to everyone that everyone needs to remember including myself. Thank you
This was absolutely beautiful. I'm so very sorry for your loss.. This made me cry..
I pray to my lossed ones. We have conversations in my head.. They always respond when I'm sad or in my greatest triumphs. Even if you don't pray much, you should try. They will always be watching over you :)
I always find it emotionally touching when such a serious event is told through a child's eyes, it gives it a depth that does't need to be explained. We all know what its like to be a kid and not know what's happening in a situation, and we hold tight to those softened blows adults give us till we are able to realize what's going on. You captured the softened blow without needing an adult perspective, which shows the power of younger minds. I personally learn new things from my little sister everyday. Thank you for sharing this.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you for your time... I find this to be very true and it didn't occur to me how much a kid goes.. read moreThank you for your time... I find this to be very true and it didn't occur to me how much a kid goes through and sees it in a whole new different way then rather an adult would see it... I really appreciate the comment!
Tearful eyes..
May her soul rest in peace & your friendship be blessed forever. Kuddos to "The Blonde Girl"
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thanks FG... My week hasn't been going very well and so I have been reading this story about her ove.. read moreThanks FG... My week hasn't been going very well and so I have been reading this story about her over and over... I wish I could talk to her... I miss her.
9 Years Ago
Hope the sun shines brighter tomorrow, talk to her I know she's listening :)
9 Years Ago
How?.......
9 Years Ago
I speak to my best friend in my ups & lows, he listens & replies, since ur bestie is at the same pla.. read moreI speak to my best friend in my ups & lows, he listens & replies, since ur bestie is at the same place as him I know she'd be listening too. That's how!
9 Years Ago
Since then... I've never prayed... how do you know it'll even work for me?
What's the harm in trying? If somehow you dont connect i'll be sitting here on writers cafe you coul.. read moreWhat's the harm in trying? If somehow you dont connect i'll be sitting here on writers cafe you could share with me :)
9 Years Ago
k... i´ll be back in a sec... i'm nervous
9 Years Ago
I'll be here after a sec too :) and dont be nervous just believe :)
Thank you for sharing this story with us, It's drama story, I love it. I think our friend is naerer than brother or sister. Good writing.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you! I apreaciate the comment! Sometimes I think so also, Friends come nearer to you then your.. read moreThank you! I apreaciate the comment! Sometimes I think so also, Friends come nearer to you then your sister or brother sometimes in somethings.
Gorgeous. It must have been heart breaking to lose a young friend. I too can relate. My friend/neighbor, 14 years ago, had a baby veinn her brain. Because she was growing fast her vains did not grow along with her, and popped. Im not sure what the cancer was called, I was 10, but all I knew was that she left behind her little sister. Till this day I have always taken cate of the little teenager girl because I know that is what my Angel friend would have wanted me to do.
Therefore, thank you for sharing, this story did bring back memories.
-Norma
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thanks Norma! We can choose what to do when these hard things come into our life, Stay depressed or .. read moreThanks Norma! We can choose what to do when these hard things come into our life, Stay depressed or learn and grow from it. She helped me grow a lot and still She helps by sharing this story with others. Thank you once again for the wonderful review!
My name is C. Lee Battaglia and I love to read… I read so much that my Mom grounds me from reading and tells me to go do something else. I am 20 years old.
I hated reading when I was little .. more..