MY OBITUARY CELEBRATION OF LIFE SUNRISE MARCH 28,1962- SUNSET MARCH 29, 2008

funny obituary

TOTO,Lottiemae

Age 46, baptized into the hope of Christ resurrection, Saturday March 29, 2008.

Daughter of James and Gertrude Daily. Mother proceeded in death with her. Father is remarried.

Christain, went to church every Sunday. Graduated from  Beaumont high school in 1980. Attended Flo Valley Community college  for a year. Worked as a Nurses Aid for six years at Tangle wood Nursing Home.

Lottiemae liked bowling and playing the piano for her church choir. One day Lottiemae went bowling with some other members of her church, as she proceeded to roll the bowling ball down the aisle, her fingers got stuck and she went down with the ball, although she hit a stike.

Her favorite bible verse is : THE LORD IS MY SHEPPARD.

Her favorite spirtual song is: I'M GOING UP A YOUNDER.

She leaves to cherish her memory,a loving husband and five children, with eight grandchildren. 

Funeral service will be held at 10:00 a.m. Monday at Tangle Wood Chapel. Entombment Resurrection Cemetary, all memorials to the Cancer Society.

Author's Note

I want to know what you think of this, I entered it into a contest.

Reviews

[Sydelle Houston]

My friend,

At least you made a strike, last time I went bowling my fingernails were so long they got caught in the holes and when I swung back, it flew, then hit someone with the ball!

Now I enjoy your stories, and obits are basically telling a person's journey in a nutshell. You could always pick up a couple of real obituaries and rework this if you must. (When you submit your work into a contest, try to correct the typos because some judges won't even take your piece seriously with spelling mistakes in it.)

I'd rather you show the journey of life through your stories, that is where your creative strength lies.

[MichelleSun]

ok.

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

This line expressed a life lived and a life unended. Well Written.

baptized into the hope of Christ resurrection,

[BlessedLove]

It's sad....this recollection...
While I celebrated My bday on March 29th....you saw death...

Interesting write.

[Cedric D. Jr.]

Sydelle Houston is correct. This is headed in the right direction, but one of your strongest suits as an author is your creativity. Your writing is already headed in a rather hudibrastic direction as it stands; it's somewhat poetic actually. You should certainly elaborate on the actual path and use the elaboration as a conduit through which your creativity can provide a new element in your obituary.

[Adrian K. Smith]

It is an interesting attempt at humor, one of those deadpan moments caught amidst a doubletake. Wait? Did that say what I think it did? No, it could not have. Surely not. Let me read it again, yes, yes, well, yes, okay...what? Okay, wait. Yes, yes, yes, okay. In that, it worked well.

[Kenny L. Mitchell]

It reminds me of several people that I know. It seems you are using this piece to convey the common value of life. It seems you are using descriptive narrative in a way to define who this person is/was. I like this! I feel it's a good introduction/final call for the person it describes. VERY good work.

[Camille Corbett]

I'm not exactly sure what to make of this!It reminds me the spoon river anthology. But I'm unsure if this is real or not!

[lawrence bear]

its messed up there... lol but funny, is this a actual obituary?